Friday, March 24, 2006

Cliche spotter

Andy (my partner) is brilliant at critiquing my work. In particular, his pedantry means I don't get away with anything at all. I've posted Activity 6.3 (about the character who can't forget the history of a place) into the cafe for more feedback because Andy pointed out so many things he 'didn't get'. I want second, third and fourth opinions! He looked at my Pitt Rivers piece (Activity 6.2) and picked out the phrase, 'her voice sounded far away' as a cliche. To prove his point, he typed it into Google. How useful was that! It's an immediate cliche spotter! There was some pretty terrible writing up there... Try it.

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